Thursday, February 21, 2008

COLES WRITTING

About 2 years ago my mom, grandma and I too a trip to Florida. The only problem was we had to drive. We had to drive because my grandmas’ car was at our house and we had to bring it back to her house. During the trip we experience many things. One of the most forgetful thing that happened was staying in the worst hotel I ever. But when we got into Florida we went to Orlando and we stayed at a hotel with a water park. This was one of the best trips I had with a relative.

1 comment:

Liz said...

Cole,

You need to organize your thoughts and proofread the writing before you publish it. To make this a better piece I would add details and descriptions so it is clear for the reader.

Mrs. Kayzar