Friday, February 15, 2008
Kevin
The last family trip I went was to go to my cousins house to spend christmas their. When we left I brought my DVD player with me so I wouldn’t get bored. My entire family was in the car besides my dad who was coming later. We had to go pickup my cousin in Milwaukee at his friends’ apartment. While we were driving we hit a snow storm, and it was icy. We were having a family fight as usual between my brothers Andrew and Henry. We stopped at McDonalds because my brothers insisted we get something to eat. I didn’t get anything but my brother got a hash brown. My brothers were yelling at my mom for how slow she was driving. I didn’t really care as long as we got there. We were traveling against a lake so it was kind of scary, because there was only a guard rail. When we got there I was happy and I had a great Christmas.
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kenvin thats a great story =)! i thougt is waz hilarious
NICOLE FORTUNE
I am glad you had a good christmas. Great story too. -Gabby**
freaky
HEITZER
WHAT UP HOMIE G
From gerkal fletchers
Nice story!!! lots of detail
Wow that sounds like fun! Haha
*Maddie
how could you get bored with your cousins!?!?! well good stoy..sounds funny!haha
~maggie~
you never get board you freak! you name is HIETZER ok. nice story i like the structure
Big Guy
Gabe merkkow
Your first name Kevin?????
I thought your name was Heitzer!
_STEVE_
Wow steve, nice story kevin
-Ryan
was your DVD player really that important.
ND
that would be scarry
nick bax
Sounds fun! Why do you think your cousins are boring???
-Kiran
nice sentence structure
cool story too
lol great story Kev! I fight with my siblings in the car all the time too :)
~Meghan~
Kevin,
Reread. A lot of errors throughour your writing. You need to take time with your final product.
Mrs. Kayzar
omg!!! lol!! i thought this waz so funny i fight with my brother and sister in the car all the time, and my mom and dad tell us to quiet down but we never do we keep annoying them!
~cLaIrBeAr~
I had to go on a road trip too for christmas, except i don't have a brother. In the first sentence their should be spelled there.
-Ryan
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