Friday, February 15, 2008
Divya's Family Trip
Quickly and excitedly, I woke up bright and early in the morning. Today we were going to India. I was going to India with my family, and we were going to attend my uncle’s wedding. Although we go to India a lot, we never actually “toured” some special sites. The airplane ride was long. We watched Indian movies and we played some games. Although the plane ride was fun, an 8 hr + 8 hr flight was really long, and I felt airsick. My dad said that this time we could see the Taj Mahal after the wedding. Magnificently and majestic, the Taj Mahal stood like a palace instead of its real purpose as a tomb. Although the Taj Mahal looked like it was completely made of marble, it has beautiful inlaid gemstones in it. To go to the Taj Mahal was a wonderful experience, and we as a family would love to go again.
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Divya,
What a great trip and an experience you will always remember. I have traveled a lot and each trip is unique and memorable.
I luv ur story!
*Maddie
Hi! I love ur story! It sounds likea great place!
~Laurel
You are so lucky, that you got to go to the Taj Mahal!! That is so cool. Also I really liked your story it was really well written!
*Mackenzie
Great story!! Did u have fun?? What was your favorite part??_ GabbyL
That sounds like so much fun! I wish i could go see the taj Mahal!
Samantha
Divya,
You could have added voice to your writing by adding details about what you saw.
Create interest for the reader.
Mrs. Kayzar
OMG!! the Taj Mahal is so pretty, i wish i could have gone wit u!! GREAT STORY DIVYA!!!
~cLaIrBeAr~
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that sounds great!!! fun fun fun
love ya...
lucy
SoUnDs FuN!!!
Hope you had a great trip!!
-Izzy =]
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