Friday, February 15, 2008
Emily Robinson's bad/good hair cut!
It was about 7 o’clock p.m and I wanted a hair cut. My mom wouldn’t set up an appointment so I decided to do it myself. Oh did I mention I was 7 years old. My hair turned out pretty bad, obviously. My sister walked in and screamed. She grabbed my arm and pulled my down the stairs to show mom, then, she also screamed. I honestly didn’t think it looked THAT bad. The next day we went to the hairdresser place. The lady of course screamed, jeez, I guess my hair really was that bad. She gave me bangs and cut my hair all the way to the bottom of my ears. That was very short. The next day I went to school, and surprisingly everyone liked my hair, I actually could do many things with my hair, I put a headband in it, I put it in mini pigtails, many things, and I looked cute. My horrible haircut, turned out to be one of the best I had ever had. But from that day forward I decided not to cut my hair again. =)
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23 comments:
Emily, I like ur story. It is really good.
~soumya
Ha Ha! It sounds like somthing I would do! Good Job. -Gabby L**
Emily, i loved the story it was hilarious. im suprised that you cut your own hair. now you know not to do that anymore. =)
Emily, I love your story. i cut my sister's hair once =). ~Christie
Emily your story is very good. You have a lot of different sentences! ~Samantha~
dont cut your own hair.
-kevin
LOL! That put a smile on my face! Keep up the great work!
~Laurel
P.S: Don't cut your hair! JKJKJK
Great story! Very funny too.
~Kayla
Wow that sounds like fun but scary. i did that once and my whole family was over and i left my hair on the table and some one scramed WHO'S HAIR IS THIS?!?! oh that was fun. Good job.
^*^Shelby^*^
I LOVE YOUR STORY!! it made me crack up! thats so funny that you made your own appointment! haha:)
<3 maggie
jeez emily you have tons of comments!
haha i love the story!
im glad ur bad haircut turned out good!
I could have done it 4 u like last time! LOL
*Maddie*
hey emily that was really good. nice story it was really funny.
divya
I almost did the same thing in preschool but was too scared to take off more than a bit. Funny.
the last one was mine
Jack
hahahah yes...i was crazy when i was 7
thanks for the commentss
=)
I cut my hair once too, but not that much.
-Ryan
Emily,
I am glad that your story had a positive twist to the end.
When writing start including similes, metaphors. Increase the vocabulary chosen.
The grammar is good just continue thinking about when to use commas.
Mrs. Kayzar
haha way to go emily!!
but at least u go to go get the hair cut u wanted to good plan!!
haha!
♥HALEY BRANOVAN!!!
p.s good story
Reminds me of my neigbor-she tried cutting her hair, but it didn't turn out that bad
~Carly
CUUUTE
haha funny story
i like ur hair now 2
ily!!!
~Lucyy =)
u r fattttttttttttt ++++++++++++
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