Wednesday, February 20, 2008
The Trip By: Grant
Day by day, city by city, state by state we drove. We drove for 5 days. There also was no place to go to the bathroom. This was the worst feeling ever. As we stopped at Mount Rushmore, I saw the huge piece of stone. It was a sight to see. Then we went back on the road. Two days later we arrived at are initial destination, the Grand Tetons. I was amazed as the big massive rock towered over me. We stayed at Wyoming for a couple more days and then took the long ride home. This was a wonderful and an exciting journey and sometime, try it!
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13 comments:
Good story
Nice Story. It would stink to be stuck in a car for 5 days. :(
~Laurel :)
That sounds fun looking at rocks
-Jared
nice beginning
cool story that would stink HAHAHA
COLEEEE
Must've been cool to go too Mount Rushmore
Best Story I Have Ever Read!!!
Grant,
Well written but actual details about the final destination would have improved the piece.
Add your voice and excitement to the writing.
Mrs. Kayzar
Grant,
Well written but actual details about the final destination would have improved the piece.
Add your voice and excitement to the writing.
Mrs. Kayzar
Grant that was a funny story about a huge massive rock but y did u drive for 5 days there and 5 days back to stay there for 7 days. Wow grant your such a nerdy dorky pig. But how big was the rock i want to know and calling it a rock makes it sound smaller than it really is you should call it the mountain of doom and despair it would make it sound better and kooler like ice cream on a hot summer day. But all in all i liked the story i thought it was just grand idea and i'm sure u had a fantabulus time on your trip to mnt rushmore for 17 days ten of which u were driving in a car that must have been tarrible with lucy she can get pretty loud and i mean it.
Good Job!! Loved the story!! I totally wish it was summer!!
GabbyL**
WOW
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