By: Gabe Merkow
I remember the day where I had the worst haircut ever. Slowly, I walked into the salon. The man look scary, but he was holding a razor, so that made him scarier. He told me I was just getting a trim. My hair was down to my shoulders. I hadn’t cut it since I was two, I was 4 now. I loved my hair. I fell asleep when he was cutting my hair. I was glad when it was over. I looked in the mirror. AHHHH!! It was all off I was bald. Even though it was all off, I new it would grow back.
Wednesday, February 20, 2008
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11 comments:
good sentance structure.
That story p4wns n00bs.
_STEVE_
That's funny, why hadn't you cut your hair for 2 years?
-Ryan
Thats funny. I'm afraid of razors too. Why hadn't you cut your hair for 2 years???
Very funny. That must have been scary. Whats with not cutting your hair for 2 years???????
-Kiran
hahahaha
wow.
-em-
dude you r my idol!! dude you r amazing!
Big guy
Kyle gibe
Gabe,
Your writing overall is pretty short. I would step up the content.
Mrs. Kayzar
cool though baldness stinks
-Jared
cool though baldness stinks
-Jared
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH that's hilarious.
-Billseph
That's sooo funny!! I would definitly hate it if that happened to me!!
GabbyL**
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