Friday, February 15, 2008
Shelby
Awkwardly, I got into the nerve-wrecking car. The way there was short. Getting a new hair cut should be fun, but I was scared to death. Though my sister was exited, I was scared because my hair was never short before. My hair was in the middle of my back. It was a light brown, the occasional blond highlight here or there. After the hair cut, my hair was a little lower than my shoulder, and had a lot of layers. My mom wanted me to get my hair cut. Oddly my little sister is the one who convinced me to get my hair cut. Before getting the hair cut was scary, now I’m exited for everyone to see. I really can’t wait.
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12 comments:
Well personaly it sounded exactly what you'd excpect to hear from a girl. TO MUCH DESCRIPTION! I've got a hairball!
haha
i love the story shelbs!
i love ur short hair :)
TAY***
Shelbs i ove your story. its very descriptive,and AWESOME! haha:)
<3 maggie
I don't think that you describe to much! You are a great writer!
~LAUREL :)
wow nice and short right to da point. great job
divya
U r such a good writer! I luv ur hair it is so cute!
*Maddie
ur story waz great shelby. it wasnt 2 descriptive either.
~soumya
Awesome story! Sounds like what I felt like when I got my hair cut!
GabbyL**
shelby!!
thats so cuteee!!!
it looks greeaatt!!!
Emmmyyy
I love your hair cut short Shelby!
Super cute
nice story
~lucayy
Shelby,
Looking at the comments, everyone likes your haircut.
Looking at your writing, look at word choice. Somewhat repetitive with word choice. Also some description could have added to the story.
Mrs. Kayzar
HAHAHAHHA!!!
I lovee youu hairr!!!
hahah very preetyy!
ilyy k bieee
-pss fromm izzy
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