Wednesday, February 20, 2008
joey
Every year we take a family trip to Colorado. The ride gets very boring when we drive through Nebraska. Since we have a T.V. in our car it isn’t that boring. Sometimes on the way their we stop at a water park to spend the night. When we don’t stop we drive through and when we get to Copper Mountain we have to Wight until we can get a room. We go to this really big gift shop and we all get $50 to but something because my dad is already paying for the trip. One year at Copper I was talking to my friends on the side of the mountain when this person comes and hits my and I flew into the forest. The good thing is that I didn’t get hurt.
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3 comments:
i am amazing
nice paragraph though
Good story but you have to many simple sentances.
Joey,
Proofread your writing for spelling and punctuation. Also, use commas in complex sentences.
Mrs. Kayzar
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