Thursday, February 21, 2008

Sam Fredman

Florida



Loudly, the plane took off on its flight to Florida. It would be a two hour flight. It was a long flight, yet it was good flight. When we landed, we jumped in the air. We met my grandparents at the security gate. After we met, we went out to eat. We went to Uno’s. After lunch, we started the drive to the condo. Quietly, we approached the condo and went to the beach. After the beach, we finally went to sleep for the night. Although we were only in Florida for three days it was very fun.

1 comment:

Liz said...

Sam,

Grammar wise nice job. Interesting wise I would add detail and desription. Show what you did on the trip.

Mrs. Kayzar