Wednesday, February 20, 2008

Gabes writing

By: Gabe Merkow



I remember the day where I had the worst haircut ever. Slowly, I walked into the salon. The man look scary, but he was holding a razor, so that made him scarier. He told me I was just getting a trim. My hair was down to my shoulders. I hadn’t cut it since I was two, I was 4 now. I loved my hair. I fell asleep when he was cutting my hair. I was glad when it was over. I looked in the mirror. AHHHH!! It was all off I was bald. Even though it was all off, I new it would grow back.

11 comments:

Liz said...

good sentance structure.
That story p4wns n00bs.
_STEVE_

Liz said...

That's funny, why hadn't you cut your hair for 2 years?

-Ryan

Liz said...

Thats funny. I'm afraid of razors too. Why hadn't you cut your hair for 2 years???

Liz said...

Very funny. That must have been scary. Whats with not cutting your hair for 2 years???????

-Kiran

Liz said...

hahahaha
wow.


-em-

Liz said...

dude you r my idol!! dude you r amazing!


Big guy

Kyle gibe

Liz said...

Gabe,

Your writing overall is pretty short. I would step up the content.

Mrs. Kayzar

Liz said...

cool though baldness stinks

-Jared

Liz said...

cool though baldness stinks

-Jared

Liz said...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH that's hilarious.

-Billseph

Liz said...

That's sooo funny!! I would definitly hate it if that happened to me!!
GabbyL**