Wednesday, February 20, 2008

joey

Every year we take a family trip to Colorado. The ride gets very boring when we drive through Nebraska. Since we have a T.V. in our car it isn’t that boring. Sometimes on the way their we stop at a water park to spend the night. When we don’t stop we drive through and when we get to Copper Mountain we have to Wight until we can get a room. We go to this really big gift shop and we all get $50 to but something because my dad is already paying for the trip. One year at Copper I was talking to my friends on the side of the mountain when this person comes and hits my and I flew into the forest. The good thing is that I didn’t get hurt.

3 comments:

Fredo said...

i am amazing
nice paragraph though

Billseph said...

Good story but you have to many simple sentances.

Liz said...

Joey,

Proofread your writing for spelling and punctuation. Also, use commas in complex sentences.
Mrs. Kayzar