Wednesday, February 20, 2008

Nicole Fortune: Texas



I went to Midland, Texas for a family reunion in July. It was a very interesting experience. I met new family members, and also saw the relatives, that I already new. I thought my family was already huge, but when I met my other relatives, I realized that it was GIGANTIC! Everyone at the family reunion got along great. I just met some of these people, and I already felt as though, I knew them my whole life. This was one of the best family trips I have ever been on!!!

4 comments:

Liz said...

great story nicole, it must be cool having a giant family.

Liz said...

good job Nicole. It must have been really fun to meet new members of your family.

- Lauren

Liz said...

Nicole,

Add detail and voice to your piece. Make the reader feel like they are in Texas with you. Use show vs. tell.

Mrs. Kayzar

Liz said...

cool. it must be nice to have a family which u can actually get along with!!!

divya