Los Angeles
Last summer I went to Los Angeles (L.A.) for my cousin’s wedding. During my trip I found out that L.A. is really cool. We stayed in a house near the ocean. There were huge waves, and the water was not cold. There were also beaches that stretched on for miles and miles. The downtown area was pretty hectic. There was a lot of traffic, mostly because of all the entertainments and shops. There were lots of huge homes to see in Bellaire and Beverly Hills. The best thing of all though was Hollywood. All over the streets there were people dressed up as Cat Woman, Spiderman and other Hollywood characters, there was even a really fat Superman. Another awesome place was the wax museum. It had many figures of famous actors and actresses, but there were not ones from some of the newer films. I think it would be fun to live in L.A.
11 comments:
Sounds like fun! Good JOb on the story!!
GabbyL**
NICE
That place that you went to sounds cool
_STEVE_
dude when were 16 were going on a rode trip to L.A. Nice story i like it. Y didn't you go see a lakers game
that lat on was
Big guy gabe merkow
hectic is a big word.
-emily-
I have been to L.A. too. It's a fun state to go to. I remember when i found $25 in a parking structure. It was fun.
-Kiran
LA is sweet
i know someone who lives there
Sounds cool
-Jared
lol fat super man AWSOME i wish i went there your friend nic
Ryan,
The writing itself is fine. You do need to push yourself and use more than simple sentences. There is a compound sentence but no complex. Push yourself for a challenge.
Mrs. Kayzar
i think you spelled bellaire wrong
-kevin
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